Do you like the poem I published at Keyhole? It's okay if you don't. I consider it "a real poem," as opposed to other poems that I write which are "fake poems." It should be read very fast.
It's true, and it's called "Some Men in My Family." I think it is very sad.
14 comments:
I liked it. nice work.
Yay yay yay yay JA
That is really great.
You are a good poem writer, Adam.
I'm not about to start looking on here all the time or anything, so don't try to make me.
Thank you Bryan. That means a lot. I hope you keep checkin in here from time to time, at least.
I've recently started following you here via JS, and I must say, I wish I had followed you sooner.
That's a really wonderful poem, Adam. Completely honest, intense and hits all the right notes, sometimes so quietly, at all the right places. Thank you for sharing.
-phu
"It’s the depth that makes the difference"
That better be in Adam Robison and Other Poems.
You're right, it's very sad!
But very good simultaneously.
I am very grateful for the comments, Phu, justin, and Chris. Very grateful indeed, and glad to have you following now, Phu.
it's a great one. you can balance the funny-sad, intellectual-immediateness in a poem like no other. poems maybe shouldn;t even do that, what makes yours so good.
Love it. I hope it's in the book too. I won't buy the book unless it is.
No. I will, even if it isn't.
whoa i really like that poem
This poem is in my book, along with like 65 others just like it.
Thank you thank you.
adam that poem is fucking great.
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